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i'm currently making a text based choose your own adventure game with possible RPG elements. i'm somewhat new at programming, my father is very good ad QB64, but isn't always able to help me with my problems, i'm not asking about story help but with ways i could make my code run more efficiently. iv'e recently replaced a lot of if statements with select case, which in turn has helped with a lot of bugs. but i'm not sure what else would be effective.



SCREEN 12
DIM SHARED age%, gender$, Name$
soundHandle& = _SNDOPEN("Music.mp3") 'opens the sound file
_SNDPLAYFILE "Music.mp3", , .25 'plays the sound file
menu:
CLS
PRINT
PRINT "=============================="
PRINT "THE LOST FOREST: THE BEGINNING"
PRINT "=============================="
PRINT " The Choose Your Own Adventure"
PRINT "=============================="
PRINT "What Will Your Heros Name be?:";
Name$ = Ask$(5, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 11, 0)
CLS

COLOR 15, 0
PRINT Name$ + "How Old will Your Hero be?: ";: age% = VAL(Ask$(3, 0, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
'INPUT "", age%

CLS
age:
IF age% < 21 THEN PRINT "Your Hero is Not Old Enough to go on This Journey"
IF age% > 100 THEN PRINT "Your Hero Falls Over and Dies from Old Age"; " GAME OVER"
IF age% < 21 THEN END
IF age% >= 100 THEN END



Gender:
COLOR 15, 0

PRINT Name$ + " What is Your Gender (M/F/ECT): ";: INPUT "", gender$
CLS
ready:
COLOR 15, 0
Saythis "Are You Ready to go Onto This Grand Adventure?: " 'saythis is a sub to wrap text when it gets close to the end of the screen
ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
CLS

IF INSTR(1, ready$, "y") THEN GOTO story ELSE
GOTO ready
IF INSTR(1, ready$, "n") THEN
GOTO rus
ELSE GOTO ready

END IF

rus:

CLS


PRINT "are you sure that you dont want to go on this adventure?:", hello$
ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
IF INSTR(1, hello$, "y") THEN END else
GOTO rus

IF INSTR(1, hello$, "n") THEN GOTO story ELSE
GOTO rus

story:
CLS
Saythis " A long time ago, when sorcery rained supreme, there lived a powerful sorcerer, his name was Steve (placeholder name). he struck fear even among the most powerful of sorcerers and warriors of his time. He overthrew the High Wizard ma’ster but was slightly weakened in the process. most thought being loyal would save their lives, but Steve still enjoyed killing even those most loyal to him. he ruled for many years, until one day an outsider with blackened armor and a sword able to cut through even the strongest of foes like margarine, confronted Steve and challenged him to a battle, Steve thought him mad and struck him with a spell that should've killed him instantly, but the outsider stood there, unharmed, and drove his sword into Steves chest. After that day the stranger faded into history but Steve is believed to still be alive, his soul, trapped in the hero's sword. now a new hero is born but unknown to anyone, he will once again strike down Steve"
INPUT "type anything to continue: ", story$
IF story$ = "" THEN GOTO pub
pub:

CLS
saving

Saythis "You Stand Inside Your towns local Pub, Tipsy Merry Men surround you, Most of Them you Recognize, Over by The bar maiden, is Smith, The Smith, Aptly Named Fellow Who means well But isn't all That Smart, He Dropped out of School at a young Age to Pursue His Trade, like his Father. Over Near the door is johnson the apprentice Carpenter, Commonly has to Visit Smith, He can't seem to keep from breaking his tools, although he is clumsy he is Very ambitious learner willing to learn from his mistakes instead of getting upset from them. And Sitting next to you is Your best friend Michael Mconline, You've been best friends for most of your life, he wants to become a Night of the Land, but he doesn't have the gold to pay for the training."
INPUT "What Will you Do Next?: ", choice$
SELECT CASE choice$
CASE "talk to smith"
GOTO DlogS
CASE "talk to Micheal"
GOTO Micheal_dialog
CASE "talk to Johnson"
GOTO DlogJ
CASE "go outside"
GOTO outside
CASE ELSE
GOTO pub
END SELECT


Micheal_dialog:
Saythis "You look ever to your best friend and"

outside:

PRINT ""
Saythis " You stand outside the Pub, across the road is the lake, about 50 meters west of the lake stands your house, down the road is the town center and the Fountain. Just behind the foutain is the Town Hall "
INPUT "Where will you go?: ", Location$
IF Location$ = "go back inside" THEN GOTO pub

DlogS:

CLS
PRINT "you walk up to Smith and greet him"
PRINT "1: chat weapons"
PRINT "2: joining up"
PRINT "3: current events"

INPUT " what will You Say?: ", DlogS$

IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"

SELECT CASE dlog$

CASE "joining up"
GOTO teamupsmith

CASE "chat weapons"
GOTO weaponchat


CASE "current events"
GOTO CES
CASE ELSE
GOTO DlogS

END SELECT




weaponchat:

CLS
check_1% = 1

Saythis "You ask smith about any recent weapons hes made recently,"
Saythis "He says that he hasn't had any jobs due to how small the town is, but he goes on about a recent job where he had to fix a plow, but the plow was fine, the ox was just stubbern and pretended that he couldnt pull it. You ask him if hes willing to make some wepons, he agrees, but you tell him that when you know what wepons you will need you'll put in the request"
INPUT "", weaponchat$
weponchat$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
check_1% = 1
SELECT CASE weaponchat$

CASE "return"
GOTO DlogS
CASE "back"
RETURN
CASE ELSE
GOTO weaponchat
END SELECT

teamupsmith:
CLS
PRINT "You ask Smith if he would like to join up and go see if the rumors are true"
PRINT " he says that he has some things he needs to finish but when he does he might"
IF check_1% = 1 THEN PRINT "I also have to make those weapons you requested"
PRINT "what will you do?: ";
INPUT teamupS$
SELECT CASE teamupS$
CASE "return"
GOTO DlogS

END SELECT



CES:
CLS
Saythis "you talk to smith about recent events that have been going on, he says that alot of soldiers have been passing through the village recenty, and a lot of injured coming back. he wonders what could be doing this to so many soldiers, he hasnt heard of any war or alot of citizens being drafted"
INPUT "what will you do? :"; CES$

INPUT "", CES$
SELECT CASE CES$
CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ELSE
GOTO CES

END SELECT
DlogJ:
CLS
'not sure what will happen here
'johnson is the carpenter
Saythis "you start to walk towards johnson but when he gets up go greet you, but he trips on his own feet and falls flat on his face, you help him up as he appoligized for his clumbsines, you tell him"
PRINT "1: you should be more careful"
PRINT "2: you cluts learn to walk"
PRINT "3: its ok, ive done that before"

PRINT "what will you say? (1,2,3...)"; DlogJ$

SELECT CASE DlogJ$
CASE "1 "

CASE "2"

CASE "3"

CASE ELSE
GOTO DlogJ


END SELECT
Smithery:
CLS
' you will get smith as an ally here
PRINT "placeholder"; smithery$
SELECT CASE smithery$
CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ELSE
GOTO Smithery

END SELECT
Town_Hall:
CLS
'get a special item here that my help
PRINT "placeholder"; Town_hall$
SELECT CASE Town_hall$
CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ""

CASE ELSE
GOTO Town_Hall

END SELECT


carpender:
CLS
' get johnson as a ally here



Dark_Lord_Encounter:
CLS
'dark lord attempt to stop the proficy from becoming true by killing everyone









SUB wrong_weird_input
IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"
PRINT "i dont think you should do that"
PRINT "press e to return"
IF INKEY$ = ("e") THEN RETURN

END SUB



SUB Saythis (text$)

x = 1
WHILE x <= LEN(text$)
y = 80

DO
IF INSTR(y + x, text$, " ") > x + 79 THEN
y = y - 1
ELSE
EXIT DO
END IF

LOOP
PRINT MID$(text$, x, y)
x = x + y

WEND

END SUB



SUB Stats
strength% = 3
stamina% = 3
agility% = 3
critchance% = 3
IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
strength% = strength% + 2
stamina% = stamina% + 1
agility% = agility% + 2
critchance% = critchance% + 1


END IF


END SUB

SUB lvl

level% = 1
levelup% = 50
experience% = 5
experiencetotal% = 0

IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
level% = level% + 1
ELSE experiencetotal% = experiencetotal% * 1.25
END IF
IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
experience% = experience% + 1
END IF
END SUB





SUB saving





OPEN "save1.txt" FOR OUTPUT AS #1
PRINT Name$
PRINT age%
PRINT gender$
PRINT #1, Name$
PRINT #1, age%
PRINT #1, gender$




CLOSE #1






END SUB




































DECLARE FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)


















FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)

LOCATE x%, y%, 1
COLOR ForeColor, BackColor

a = x%
b = y%

COLOR ForeColor%, BackColor%
Variable$ = SPACE$(Length%)
DO
DO 'wait for keyboard input
MyData$ = INKEY$
LOOP WHILE MyData$ = ""

IF MyData$ = CHR$(13) THEN
Ask$ = Variable$
EXIT FUNCTION
END IF


SELECT CASE Cat% 'check what category. cat 0 is number only
CASE 0

SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$) 'check ascii value of input

CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN 'if length of user input is less than max length
LOCATE a, b 'reset cursor
b = b + 1 'add one to our length marker
MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$ 'make cursor spot the new data
PRINT MyData$;
END IF
END SELECT

CASE 1 'alpha numeric

SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)

CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
LOCATE a, b
b = b + 1
MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
PRINT MyData$;
END IF

CASE 65 TO 90, 97 TO 122, 32 '0 through 9
IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
LOCATE a, b
b = b + 1
MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
PRINT MyData$;
END IF





END SELECT


END SELECT


SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)
CASE 8 'backspace
IF b > y% THEN

MID$(Variable$, b - y%, 1) = " "
b = b - 1

LOCATE x%, y%
PRINT Variable$ + " ";
LOCATE a, b
END IF

END SELECT

SELECT CASE MyData$
CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(75)) 'left arrow
IF b > y% THEN
b = b - 1
LOCATE a, b
END IF

CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(77)) 'right arrow
IF (b - y%) < Length% THEN
b = b + 1
LOCATE a, b
END IF

CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(72)) 'up arrow
x = x

CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(80)) 'left arrow

x = x
CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(83)) 'del
Variable$ = MID$(Variable$, 1, b - y%) + RTRIM$(MID$(Variable$, (b + 2) - y%))

LOCATE x%, y%
PRINT Variable$ + " ";
LOCATE a, b

' CASE "~"
END
END SELECT




LOOP

END FUNCTION


im not asking for a debugger, ( i coudn't pay you for your time anyway ), but asking for assistance with ways to improve code that isn't effective to have ( that probably sounds like debugging)









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    i'm currently making a text based choose your own adventure game with possible RPG elements. i'm somewhat new at programming, my father is very good ad QB64, but isn't always able to help me with my problems, i'm not asking about story help but with ways i could make my code run more efficiently. iv'e recently replaced a lot of if statements with select case, which in turn has helped with a lot of bugs. but i'm not sure what else would be effective.



    SCREEN 12
    DIM SHARED age%, gender$, Name$
    soundHandle& = _SNDOPEN("Music.mp3") 'opens the sound file
    _SNDPLAYFILE "Music.mp3", , .25 'plays the sound file
    menu:
    CLS
    PRINT
    PRINT "=============================="
    PRINT "THE LOST FOREST: THE BEGINNING"
    PRINT "=============================="
    PRINT " The Choose Your Own Adventure"
    PRINT "=============================="
    PRINT "What Will Your Heros Name be?:";
    Name$ = Ask$(5, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 11, 0)
    CLS

    COLOR 15, 0
    PRINT Name$ + "How Old will Your Hero be?: ";: age% = VAL(Ask$(3, 0, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
    'INPUT "", age%

    CLS
    age:
    IF age% < 21 THEN PRINT "Your Hero is Not Old Enough to go on This Journey"
    IF age% > 100 THEN PRINT "Your Hero Falls Over and Dies from Old Age"; " GAME OVER"
    IF age% < 21 THEN END
    IF age% >= 100 THEN END



    Gender:
    COLOR 15, 0

    PRINT Name$ + " What is Your Gender (M/F/ECT): ";: INPUT "", gender$
    CLS
    ready:
    COLOR 15, 0
    Saythis "Are You Ready to go Onto This Grand Adventure?: " 'saythis is a sub to wrap text when it gets close to the end of the screen
    ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
    CLS

    IF INSTR(1, ready$, "y") THEN GOTO story ELSE
    GOTO ready
    IF INSTR(1, ready$, "n") THEN
    GOTO rus
    ELSE GOTO ready

    END IF

    rus:

    CLS


    PRINT "are you sure that you dont want to go on this adventure?:", hello$
    ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
    IF INSTR(1, hello$, "y") THEN END else
    GOTO rus

    IF INSTR(1, hello$, "n") THEN GOTO story ELSE
    GOTO rus

    story:
    CLS
    Saythis " A long time ago, when sorcery rained supreme, there lived a powerful sorcerer, his name was Steve (placeholder name). he struck fear even among the most powerful of sorcerers and warriors of his time. He overthrew the High Wizard ma’ster but was slightly weakened in the process. most thought being loyal would save their lives, but Steve still enjoyed killing even those most loyal to him. he ruled for many years, until one day an outsider with blackened armor and a sword able to cut through even the strongest of foes like margarine, confronted Steve and challenged him to a battle, Steve thought him mad and struck him with a spell that should've killed him instantly, but the outsider stood there, unharmed, and drove his sword into Steves chest. After that day the stranger faded into history but Steve is believed to still be alive, his soul, trapped in the hero's sword. now a new hero is born but unknown to anyone, he will once again strike down Steve"
    INPUT "type anything to continue: ", story$
    IF story$ = "" THEN GOTO pub
    pub:

    CLS
    saving

    Saythis "You Stand Inside Your towns local Pub, Tipsy Merry Men surround you, Most of Them you Recognize, Over by The bar maiden, is Smith, The Smith, Aptly Named Fellow Who means well But isn't all That Smart, He Dropped out of School at a young Age to Pursue His Trade, like his Father. Over Near the door is johnson the apprentice Carpenter, Commonly has to Visit Smith, He can't seem to keep from breaking his tools, although he is clumsy he is Very ambitious learner willing to learn from his mistakes instead of getting upset from them. And Sitting next to you is Your best friend Michael Mconline, You've been best friends for most of your life, he wants to become a Night of the Land, but he doesn't have the gold to pay for the training."
    INPUT "What Will you Do Next?: ", choice$
    SELECT CASE choice$
    CASE "talk to smith"
    GOTO DlogS
    CASE "talk to Micheal"
    GOTO Micheal_dialog
    CASE "talk to Johnson"
    GOTO DlogJ
    CASE "go outside"
    GOTO outside
    CASE ELSE
    GOTO pub
    END SELECT


    Micheal_dialog:
    Saythis "You look ever to your best friend and"

    outside:

    PRINT ""
    Saythis " You stand outside the Pub, across the road is the lake, about 50 meters west of the lake stands your house, down the road is the town center and the Fountain. Just behind the foutain is the Town Hall "
    INPUT "Where will you go?: ", Location$
    IF Location$ = "go back inside" THEN GOTO pub

    DlogS:

    CLS
    PRINT "you walk up to Smith and greet him"
    PRINT "1: chat weapons"
    PRINT "2: joining up"
    PRINT "3: current events"

    INPUT " what will You Say?: ", DlogS$

    IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"

    SELECT CASE dlog$

    CASE "joining up"
    GOTO teamupsmith

    CASE "chat weapons"
    GOTO weaponchat


    CASE "current events"
    GOTO CES
    CASE ELSE
    GOTO DlogS

    END SELECT




    weaponchat:

    CLS
    check_1% = 1

    Saythis "You ask smith about any recent weapons hes made recently,"
    Saythis "He says that he hasn't had any jobs due to how small the town is, but he goes on about a recent job where he had to fix a plow, but the plow was fine, the ox was just stubbern and pretended that he couldnt pull it. You ask him if hes willing to make some wepons, he agrees, but you tell him that when you know what wepons you will need you'll put in the request"
    INPUT "", weaponchat$
    weponchat$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
    check_1% = 1
    SELECT CASE weaponchat$

    CASE "return"
    GOTO DlogS
    CASE "back"
    RETURN
    CASE ELSE
    GOTO weaponchat
    END SELECT

    teamupsmith:
    CLS
    PRINT "You ask Smith if he would like to join up and go see if the rumors are true"
    PRINT " he says that he has some things he needs to finish but when he does he might"
    IF check_1% = 1 THEN PRINT "I also have to make those weapons you requested"
    PRINT "what will you do?: ";
    INPUT teamupS$
    SELECT CASE teamupS$
    CASE "return"
    GOTO DlogS

    END SELECT



    CES:
    CLS
    Saythis "you talk to smith about recent events that have been going on, he says that alot of soldiers have been passing through the village recenty, and a lot of injured coming back. he wonders what could be doing this to so many soldiers, he hasnt heard of any war or alot of citizens being drafted"
    INPUT "what will you do? :"; CES$

    INPUT "", CES$
    SELECT CASE CES$
    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ELSE
    GOTO CES

    END SELECT
    DlogJ:
    CLS
    'not sure what will happen here
    'johnson is the carpenter
    Saythis "you start to walk towards johnson but when he gets up go greet you, but he trips on his own feet and falls flat on his face, you help him up as he appoligized for his clumbsines, you tell him"
    PRINT "1: you should be more careful"
    PRINT "2: you cluts learn to walk"
    PRINT "3: its ok, ive done that before"

    PRINT "what will you say? (1,2,3...)"; DlogJ$

    SELECT CASE DlogJ$
    CASE "1 "

    CASE "2"

    CASE "3"

    CASE ELSE
    GOTO DlogJ


    END SELECT
    Smithery:
    CLS
    ' you will get smith as an ally here
    PRINT "placeholder"; smithery$
    SELECT CASE smithery$
    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ELSE
    GOTO Smithery

    END SELECT
    Town_Hall:
    CLS
    'get a special item here that my help
    PRINT "placeholder"; Town_hall$
    SELECT CASE Town_hall$
    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ""

    CASE ELSE
    GOTO Town_Hall

    END SELECT


    carpender:
    CLS
    ' get johnson as a ally here



    Dark_Lord_Encounter:
    CLS
    'dark lord attempt to stop the proficy from becoming true by killing everyone









    SUB wrong_weird_input
    IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"
    PRINT "i dont think you should do that"
    PRINT "press e to return"
    IF INKEY$ = ("e") THEN RETURN

    END SUB



    SUB Saythis (text$)

    x = 1
    WHILE x <= LEN(text$)
    y = 80

    DO
    IF INSTR(y + x, text$, " ") > x + 79 THEN
    y = y - 1
    ELSE
    EXIT DO
    END IF

    LOOP
    PRINT MID$(text$, x, y)
    x = x + y

    WEND

    END SUB



    SUB Stats
    strength% = 3
    stamina% = 3
    agility% = 3
    critchance% = 3
    IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
    strength% = strength% + 2
    stamina% = stamina% + 1
    agility% = agility% + 2
    critchance% = critchance% + 1


    END IF


    END SUB

    SUB lvl

    level% = 1
    levelup% = 50
    experience% = 5
    experiencetotal% = 0

    IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
    level% = level% + 1
    ELSE experiencetotal% = experiencetotal% * 1.25
    END IF
    IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
    experience% = experience% + 1
    END IF
    END SUB





    SUB saving





    OPEN "save1.txt" FOR OUTPUT AS #1
    PRINT Name$
    PRINT age%
    PRINT gender$
    PRINT #1, Name$
    PRINT #1, age%
    PRINT #1, gender$




    CLOSE #1






    END SUB




































    DECLARE FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)


















    FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)

    LOCATE x%, y%, 1
    COLOR ForeColor, BackColor

    a = x%
    b = y%

    COLOR ForeColor%, BackColor%
    Variable$ = SPACE$(Length%)
    DO
    DO 'wait for keyboard input
    MyData$ = INKEY$
    LOOP WHILE MyData$ = ""

    IF MyData$ = CHR$(13) THEN
    Ask$ = Variable$
    EXIT FUNCTION
    END IF


    SELECT CASE Cat% 'check what category. cat 0 is number only
    CASE 0

    SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$) 'check ascii value of input

    CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
    IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN 'if length of user input is less than max length
    LOCATE a, b 'reset cursor
    b = b + 1 'add one to our length marker
    MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$ 'make cursor spot the new data
    PRINT MyData$;
    END IF
    END SELECT

    CASE 1 'alpha numeric

    SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)

    CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
    IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
    LOCATE a, b
    b = b + 1
    MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
    PRINT MyData$;
    END IF

    CASE 65 TO 90, 97 TO 122, 32 '0 through 9
    IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
    LOCATE a, b
    b = b + 1
    MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
    PRINT MyData$;
    END IF





    END SELECT


    END SELECT


    SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)
    CASE 8 'backspace
    IF b > y% THEN

    MID$(Variable$, b - y%, 1) = " "
    b = b - 1

    LOCATE x%, y%
    PRINT Variable$ + " ";
    LOCATE a, b
    END IF

    END SELECT

    SELECT CASE MyData$
    CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(75)) 'left arrow
    IF b > y% THEN
    b = b - 1
    LOCATE a, b
    END IF

    CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(77)) 'right arrow
    IF (b - y%) < Length% THEN
    b = b + 1
    LOCATE a, b
    END IF

    CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(72)) 'up arrow
    x = x

    CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(80)) 'left arrow

    x = x
    CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(83)) 'del
    Variable$ = MID$(Variable$, 1, b - y%) + RTRIM$(MID$(Variable$, (b + 2) - y%))

    LOCATE x%, y%
    PRINT Variable$ + " ";
    LOCATE a, b

    ' CASE "~"
    END
    END SELECT




    LOOP

    END FUNCTION


    im not asking for a debugger, ( i coudn't pay you for your time anyway ), but asking for assistance with ways to improve code that isn't effective to have ( that probably sounds like debugging)









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      i'm currently making a text based choose your own adventure game with possible RPG elements. i'm somewhat new at programming, my father is very good ad QB64, but isn't always able to help me with my problems, i'm not asking about story help but with ways i could make my code run more efficiently. iv'e recently replaced a lot of if statements with select case, which in turn has helped with a lot of bugs. but i'm not sure what else would be effective.



      SCREEN 12
      DIM SHARED age%, gender$, Name$
      soundHandle& = _SNDOPEN("Music.mp3") 'opens the sound file
      _SNDPLAYFILE "Music.mp3", , .25 'plays the sound file
      menu:
      CLS
      PRINT
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT "THE LOST FOREST: THE BEGINNING"
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT " The Choose Your Own Adventure"
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT "What Will Your Heros Name be?:";
      Name$ = Ask$(5, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 11, 0)
      CLS

      COLOR 15, 0
      PRINT Name$ + "How Old will Your Hero be?: ";: age% = VAL(Ask$(3, 0, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      'INPUT "", age%

      CLS
      age:
      IF age% < 21 THEN PRINT "Your Hero is Not Old Enough to go on This Journey"
      IF age% > 100 THEN PRINT "Your Hero Falls Over and Dies from Old Age"; " GAME OVER"
      IF age% < 21 THEN END
      IF age% >= 100 THEN END



      Gender:
      COLOR 15, 0

      PRINT Name$ + " What is Your Gender (M/F/ECT): ";: INPUT "", gender$
      CLS
      ready:
      COLOR 15, 0
      Saythis "Are You Ready to go Onto This Grand Adventure?: " 'saythis is a sub to wrap text when it gets close to the end of the screen
      ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      CLS

      IF INSTR(1, ready$, "y") THEN GOTO story ELSE
      GOTO ready
      IF INSTR(1, ready$, "n") THEN
      GOTO rus
      ELSE GOTO ready

      END IF

      rus:

      CLS


      PRINT "are you sure that you dont want to go on this adventure?:", hello$
      ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      IF INSTR(1, hello$, "y") THEN END else
      GOTO rus

      IF INSTR(1, hello$, "n") THEN GOTO story ELSE
      GOTO rus

      story:
      CLS
      Saythis " A long time ago, when sorcery rained supreme, there lived a powerful sorcerer, his name was Steve (placeholder name). he struck fear even among the most powerful of sorcerers and warriors of his time. He overthrew the High Wizard ma’ster but was slightly weakened in the process. most thought being loyal would save their lives, but Steve still enjoyed killing even those most loyal to him. he ruled for many years, until one day an outsider with blackened armor and a sword able to cut through even the strongest of foes like margarine, confronted Steve and challenged him to a battle, Steve thought him mad and struck him with a spell that should've killed him instantly, but the outsider stood there, unharmed, and drove his sword into Steves chest. After that day the stranger faded into history but Steve is believed to still be alive, his soul, trapped in the hero's sword. now a new hero is born but unknown to anyone, he will once again strike down Steve"
      INPUT "type anything to continue: ", story$
      IF story$ = "" THEN GOTO pub
      pub:

      CLS
      saving

      Saythis "You Stand Inside Your towns local Pub, Tipsy Merry Men surround you, Most of Them you Recognize, Over by The bar maiden, is Smith, The Smith, Aptly Named Fellow Who means well But isn't all That Smart, He Dropped out of School at a young Age to Pursue His Trade, like his Father. Over Near the door is johnson the apprentice Carpenter, Commonly has to Visit Smith, He can't seem to keep from breaking his tools, although he is clumsy he is Very ambitious learner willing to learn from his mistakes instead of getting upset from them. And Sitting next to you is Your best friend Michael Mconline, You've been best friends for most of your life, he wants to become a Night of the Land, but he doesn't have the gold to pay for the training."
      INPUT "What Will you Do Next?: ", choice$
      SELECT CASE choice$
      CASE "talk to smith"
      GOTO DlogS
      CASE "talk to Micheal"
      GOTO Micheal_dialog
      CASE "talk to Johnson"
      GOTO DlogJ
      CASE "go outside"
      GOTO outside
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO pub
      END SELECT


      Micheal_dialog:
      Saythis "You look ever to your best friend and"

      outside:

      PRINT ""
      Saythis " You stand outside the Pub, across the road is the lake, about 50 meters west of the lake stands your house, down the road is the town center and the Fountain. Just behind the foutain is the Town Hall "
      INPUT "Where will you go?: ", Location$
      IF Location$ = "go back inside" THEN GOTO pub

      DlogS:

      CLS
      PRINT "you walk up to Smith and greet him"
      PRINT "1: chat weapons"
      PRINT "2: joining up"
      PRINT "3: current events"

      INPUT " what will You Say?: ", DlogS$

      IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"

      SELECT CASE dlog$

      CASE "joining up"
      GOTO teamupsmith

      CASE "chat weapons"
      GOTO weaponchat


      CASE "current events"
      GOTO CES
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO DlogS

      END SELECT




      weaponchat:

      CLS
      check_1% = 1

      Saythis "You ask smith about any recent weapons hes made recently,"
      Saythis "He says that he hasn't had any jobs due to how small the town is, but he goes on about a recent job where he had to fix a plow, but the plow was fine, the ox was just stubbern and pretended that he couldnt pull it. You ask him if hes willing to make some wepons, he agrees, but you tell him that when you know what wepons you will need you'll put in the request"
      INPUT "", weaponchat$
      weponchat$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      check_1% = 1
      SELECT CASE weaponchat$

      CASE "return"
      GOTO DlogS
      CASE "back"
      RETURN
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO weaponchat
      END SELECT

      teamupsmith:
      CLS
      PRINT "You ask Smith if he would like to join up and go see if the rumors are true"
      PRINT " he says that he has some things he needs to finish but when he does he might"
      IF check_1% = 1 THEN PRINT "I also have to make those weapons you requested"
      PRINT "what will you do?: ";
      INPUT teamupS$
      SELECT CASE teamupS$
      CASE "return"
      GOTO DlogS

      END SELECT



      CES:
      CLS
      Saythis "you talk to smith about recent events that have been going on, he says that alot of soldiers have been passing through the village recenty, and a lot of injured coming back. he wonders what could be doing this to so many soldiers, he hasnt heard of any war or alot of citizens being drafted"
      INPUT "what will you do? :"; CES$

      INPUT "", CES$
      SELECT CASE CES$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO CES

      END SELECT
      DlogJ:
      CLS
      'not sure what will happen here
      'johnson is the carpenter
      Saythis "you start to walk towards johnson but when he gets up go greet you, but he trips on his own feet and falls flat on his face, you help him up as he appoligized for his clumbsines, you tell him"
      PRINT "1: you should be more careful"
      PRINT "2: you cluts learn to walk"
      PRINT "3: its ok, ive done that before"

      PRINT "what will you say? (1,2,3...)"; DlogJ$

      SELECT CASE DlogJ$
      CASE "1 "

      CASE "2"

      CASE "3"

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO DlogJ


      END SELECT
      Smithery:
      CLS
      ' you will get smith as an ally here
      PRINT "placeholder"; smithery$
      SELECT CASE smithery$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO Smithery

      END SELECT
      Town_Hall:
      CLS
      'get a special item here that my help
      PRINT "placeholder"; Town_hall$
      SELECT CASE Town_hall$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO Town_Hall

      END SELECT


      carpender:
      CLS
      ' get johnson as a ally here



      Dark_Lord_Encounter:
      CLS
      'dark lord attempt to stop the proficy from becoming true by killing everyone









      SUB wrong_weird_input
      IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"
      PRINT "i dont think you should do that"
      PRINT "press e to return"
      IF INKEY$ = ("e") THEN RETURN

      END SUB



      SUB Saythis (text$)

      x = 1
      WHILE x <= LEN(text$)
      y = 80

      DO
      IF INSTR(y + x, text$, " ") > x + 79 THEN
      y = y - 1
      ELSE
      EXIT DO
      END IF

      LOOP
      PRINT MID$(text$, x, y)
      x = x + y

      WEND

      END SUB



      SUB Stats
      strength% = 3
      stamina% = 3
      agility% = 3
      critchance% = 3
      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      strength% = strength% + 2
      stamina% = stamina% + 1
      agility% = agility% + 2
      critchance% = critchance% + 1


      END IF


      END SUB

      SUB lvl

      level% = 1
      levelup% = 50
      experience% = 5
      experiencetotal% = 0

      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      level% = level% + 1
      ELSE experiencetotal% = experiencetotal% * 1.25
      END IF
      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      experience% = experience% + 1
      END IF
      END SUB





      SUB saving





      OPEN "save1.txt" FOR OUTPUT AS #1
      PRINT Name$
      PRINT age%
      PRINT gender$
      PRINT #1, Name$
      PRINT #1, age%
      PRINT #1, gender$




      CLOSE #1






      END SUB




































      DECLARE FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)


















      FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)

      LOCATE x%, y%, 1
      COLOR ForeColor, BackColor

      a = x%
      b = y%

      COLOR ForeColor%, BackColor%
      Variable$ = SPACE$(Length%)
      DO
      DO 'wait for keyboard input
      MyData$ = INKEY$
      LOOP WHILE MyData$ = ""

      IF MyData$ = CHR$(13) THEN
      Ask$ = Variable$
      EXIT FUNCTION
      END IF


      SELECT CASE Cat% 'check what category. cat 0 is number only
      CASE 0

      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$) 'check ascii value of input

      CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN 'if length of user input is less than max length
      LOCATE a, b 'reset cursor
      b = b + 1 'add one to our length marker
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$ 'make cursor spot the new data
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF
      END SELECT

      CASE 1 'alpha numeric

      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)

      CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
      LOCATE a, b
      b = b + 1
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF

      CASE 65 TO 90, 97 TO 122, 32 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
      LOCATE a, b
      b = b + 1
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF





      END SELECT


      END SELECT


      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)
      CASE 8 'backspace
      IF b > y% THEN

      MID$(Variable$, b - y%, 1) = " "
      b = b - 1

      LOCATE x%, y%
      PRINT Variable$ + " ";
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      END SELECT

      SELECT CASE MyData$
      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(75)) 'left arrow
      IF b > y% THEN
      b = b - 1
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(77)) 'right arrow
      IF (b - y%) < Length% THEN
      b = b + 1
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(72)) 'up arrow
      x = x

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(80)) 'left arrow

      x = x
      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(83)) 'del
      Variable$ = MID$(Variable$, 1, b - y%) + RTRIM$(MID$(Variable$, (b + 2) - y%))

      LOCATE x%, y%
      PRINT Variable$ + " ";
      LOCATE a, b

      ' CASE "~"
      END
      END SELECT




      LOOP

      END FUNCTION


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      i'm currently making a text based choose your own adventure game with possible RPG elements. i'm somewhat new at programming, my father is very good ad QB64, but isn't always able to help me with my problems, i'm not asking about story help but with ways i could make my code run more efficiently. iv'e recently replaced a lot of if statements with select case, which in turn has helped with a lot of bugs. but i'm not sure what else would be effective.



      SCREEN 12
      DIM SHARED age%, gender$, Name$
      soundHandle& = _SNDOPEN("Music.mp3") 'opens the sound file
      _SNDPLAYFILE "Music.mp3", , .25 'plays the sound file
      menu:
      CLS
      PRINT
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT "THE LOST FOREST: THE BEGINNING"
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT " The Choose Your Own Adventure"
      PRINT "=============================="
      PRINT "What Will Your Heros Name be?:";
      Name$ = Ask$(5, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 11, 0)
      CLS

      COLOR 15, 0
      PRINT Name$ + "How Old will Your Hero be?: ";: age% = VAL(Ask$(3, 0, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      'INPUT "", age%

      CLS
      age:
      IF age% < 21 THEN PRINT "Your Hero is Not Old Enough to go on This Journey"
      IF age% > 100 THEN PRINT "Your Hero Falls Over and Dies from Old Age"; " GAME OVER"
      IF age% < 21 THEN END
      IF age% >= 100 THEN END



      Gender:
      COLOR 15, 0

      PRINT Name$ + " What is Your Gender (M/F/ECT): ";: INPUT "", gender$
      CLS
      ready:
      COLOR 15, 0
      Saythis "Are You Ready to go Onto This Grand Adventure?: " 'saythis is a sub to wrap text when it gets close to the end of the screen
      ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      CLS

      IF INSTR(1, ready$, "y") THEN GOTO story ELSE
      GOTO ready
      IF INSTR(1, ready$, "n") THEN
      GOTO rus
      ELSE GOTO ready

      END IF

      rus:

      CLS


      PRINT "are you sure that you dont want to go on this adventure?:", hello$
      ready$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      IF INSTR(1, hello$, "y") THEN END else
      GOTO rus

      IF INSTR(1, hello$, "n") THEN GOTO story ELSE
      GOTO rus

      story:
      CLS
      Saythis " A long time ago, when sorcery rained supreme, there lived a powerful sorcerer, his name was Steve (placeholder name). he struck fear even among the most powerful of sorcerers and warriors of his time. He overthrew the High Wizard ma’ster but was slightly weakened in the process. most thought being loyal would save their lives, but Steve still enjoyed killing even those most loyal to him. he ruled for many years, until one day an outsider with blackened armor and a sword able to cut through even the strongest of foes like margarine, confronted Steve and challenged him to a battle, Steve thought him mad and struck him with a spell that should've killed him instantly, but the outsider stood there, unharmed, and drove his sword into Steves chest. After that day the stranger faded into history but Steve is believed to still be alive, his soul, trapped in the hero's sword. now a new hero is born but unknown to anyone, he will once again strike down Steve"
      INPUT "type anything to continue: ", story$
      IF story$ = "" THEN GOTO pub
      pub:

      CLS
      saving

      Saythis "You Stand Inside Your towns local Pub, Tipsy Merry Men surround you, Most of Them you Recognize, Over by The bar maiden, is Smith, The Smith, Aptly Named Fellow Who means well But isn't all That Smart, He Dropped out of School at a young Age to Pursue His Trade, like his Father. Over Near the door is johnson the apprentice Carpenter, Commonly has to Visit Smith, He can't seem to keep from breaking his tools, although he is clumsy he is Very ambitious learner willing to learn from his mistakes instead of getting upset from them. And Sitting next to you is Your best friend Michael Mconline, You've been best friends for most of your life, he wants to become a Night of the Land, but he doesn't have the gold to pay for the training."
      INPUT "What Will you Do Next?: ", choice$
      SELECT CASE choice$
      CASE "talk to smith"
      GOTO DlogS
      CASE "talk to Micheal"
      GOTO Micheal_dialog
      CASE "talk to Johnson"
      GOTO DlogJ
      CASE "go outside"
      GOTO outside
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO pub
      END SELECT


      Micheal_dialog:
      Saythis "You look ever to your best friend and"

      outside:

      PRINT ""
      Saythis " You stand outside the Pub, across the road is the lake, about 50 meters west of the lake stands your house, down the road is the town center and the Fountain. Just behind the foutain is the Town Hall "
      INPUT "Where will you go?: ", Location$
      IF Location$ = "go back inside" THEN GOTO pub

      DlogS:

      CLS
      PRINT "you walk up to Smith and greet him"
      PRINT "1: chat weapons"
      PRINT "2: joining up"
      PRINT "3: current events"

      INPUT " what will You Say?: ", DlogS$

      IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"

      SELECT CASE dlog$

      CASE "joining up"
      GOTO teamupsmith

      CASE "chat weapons"
      GOTO weaponchat


      CASE "current events"
      GOTO CES
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO DlogS

      END SELECT




      weaponchat:

      CLS
      check_1% = 1

      Saythis "You ask smith about any recent weapons hes made recently,"
      Saythis "He says that he hasn't had any jobs due to how small the town is, but he goes on about a recent job where he had to fix a plow, but the plow was fine, the ox was just stubbern and pretended that he couldnt pull it. You ask him if hes willing to make some wepons, he agrees, but you tell him that when you know what wepons you will need you'll put in the request"
      INPUT "", weaponchat$
      weponchat$ = LCASE$(Ask$(3, 1, CSRLIN, POS(0), 15, 0))
      check_1% = 1
      SELECT CASE weaponchat$

      CASE "return"
      GOTO DlogS
      CASE "back"
      RETURN
      CASE ELSE
      GOTO weaponchat
      END SELECT

      teamupsmith:
      CLS
      PRINT "You ask Smith if he would like to join up and go see if the rumors are true"
      PRINT " he says that he has some things he needs to finish but when he does he might"
      IF check_1% = 1 THEN PRINT "I also have to make those weapons you requested"
      PRINT "what will you do?: ";
      INPUT teamupS$
      SELECT CASE teamupS$
      CASE "return"
      GOTO DlogS

      END SELECT



      CES:
      CLS
      Saythis "you talk to smith about recent events that have been going on, he says that alot of soldiers have been passing through the village recenty, and a lot of injured coming back. he wonders what could be doing this to so many soldiers, he hasnt heard of any war or alot of citizens being drafted"
      INPUT "what will you do? :"; CES$

      INPUT "", CES$
      SELECT CASE CES$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO CES

      END SELECT
      DlogJ:
      CLS
      'not sure what will happen here
      'johnson is the carpenter
      Saythis "you start to walk towards johnson but when he gets up go greet you, but he trips on his own feet and falls flat on his face, you help him up as he appoligized for his clumbsines, you tell him"
      PRINT "1: you should be more careful"
      PRINT "2: you cluts learn to walk"
      PRINT "3: its ok, ive done that before"

      PRINT "what will you say? (1,2,3...)"; DlogJ$

      SELECT CASE DlogJ$
      CASE "1 "

      CASE "2"

      CASE "3"

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO DlogJ


      END SELECT
      Smithery:
      CLS
      ' you will get smith as an ally here
      PRINT "placeholder"; smithery$
      SELECT CASE smithery$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO Smithery

      END SELECT
      Town_Hall:
      CLS
      'get a special item here that my help
      PRINT "placeholder"; Town_hall$
      SELECT CASE Town_hall$
      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ""

      CASE ELSE
      GOTO Town_Hall

      END SELECT


      carpender:
      CLS
      ' get johnson as a ally here



      Dark_Lord_Encounter:
      CLS
      'dark lord attempt to stop the proficy from becoming true by killing everyone









      SUB wrong_weird_input
      IF INSTR(1, dlog$, "eat") THEN PRINT "you shoudnt do that"
      PRINT "i dont think you should do that"
      PRINT "press e to return"
      IF INKEY$ = ("e") THEN RETURN

      END SUB



      SUB Saythis (text$)

      x = 1
      WHILE x <= LEN(text$)
      y = 80

      DO
      IF INSTR(y + x, text$, " ") > x + 79 THEN
      y = y - 1
      ELSE
      EXIT DO
      END IF

      LOOP
      PRINT MID$(text$, x, y)
      x = x + y

      WEND

      END SUB



      SUB Stats
      strength% = 3
      stamina% = 3
      agility% = 3
      critchance% = 3
      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      strength% = strength% + 2
      stamina% = stamina% + 1
      agility% = agility% + 2
      critchance% = critchance% + 1


      END IF


      END SUB

      SUB lvl

      level% = 1
      levelup% = 50
      experience% = 5
      experiencetotal% = 0

      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      level% = level% + 1
      ELSE experiencetotal% = experiencetotal% * 1.25
      END IF
      IF experiencetotal% = levelup% THEN
      experience% = experience% + 1
      END IF
      END SUB





      SUB saving





      OPEN "save1.txt" FOR OUTPUT AS #1
      PRINT Name$
      PRINT age%
      PRINT gender$
      PRINT #1, Name$
      PRINT #1, age%
      PRINT #1, gender$




      CLOSE #1






      END SUB




































      DECLARE FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)


















      FUNCTION Ask$ (Length%, Cat%, x%, y%, ForeColor%, BackColor%)

      LOCATE x%, y%, 1
      COLOR ForeColor, BackColor

      a = x%
      b = y%

      COLOR ForeColor%, BackColor%
      Variable$ = SPACE$(Length%)
      DO
      DO 'wait for keyboard input
      MyData$ = INKEY$
      LOOP WHILE MyData$ = ""

      IF MyData$ = CHR$(13) THEN
      Ask$ = Variable$
      EXIT FUNCTION
      END IF


      SELECT CASE Cat% 'check what category. cat 0 is number only
      CASE 0

      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$) 'check ascii value of input

      CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN 'if length of user input is less than max length
      LOCATE a, b 'reset cursor
      b = b + 1 'add one to our length marker
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$ 'make cursor spot the new data
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF
      END SELECT

      CASE 1 'alpha numeric

      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)

      CASE 48 TO 57 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
      LOCATE a, b
      b = b + 1
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF

      CASE 65 TO 90, 97 TO 122, 32 '0 through 9
      IF LEN(RTRIM$(Variable$)) < Length% THEN
      LOCATE a, b
      b = b + 1
      MID$(Variable$, (b - y%), 1) = MyData$
      PRINT MyData$;
      END IF





      END SELECT


      END SELECT


      SELECT CASE ASC(MyData$)
      CASE 8 'backspace
      IF b > y% THEN

      MID$(Variable$, b - y%, 1) = " "
      b = b - 1

      LOCATE x%, y%
      PRINT Variable$ + " ";
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      END SELECT

      SELECT CASE MyData$
      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(75)) 'left arrow
      IF b > y% THEN
      b = b - 1
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(77)) 'right arrow
      IF (b - y%) < Length% THEN
      b = b + 1
      LOCATE a, b
      END IF

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(72)) 'up arrow
      x = x

      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(80)) 'left arrow

      x = x
      CASE (CHR$(0) + CHR$(83)) 'del
      Variable$ = MID$(Variable$, 1, b - y%) + RTRIM$(MID$(Variable$, (b + 2) - y%))

      LOCATE x%, y%
      PRINT Variable$ + " ";
      LOCATE a, b

      ' CASE "~"
      END
      END SELECT




      LOOP

      END FUNCTION


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